With the birds chirping ever so softly in that afternoon sunshine
And the streets buzzing with cars going zoom zoom
The crescendo hit peak and went dead silent
When you suddenly appeared
I could hear the crackling of the spring leaves
As you marched forward from a distance
Your every step, I counted
13 in all
'Hello', you said
Then followed the gaze
You held it long enough to plant seeds of you in my heart
I was transfixed, speechless and filled with joy
Your lips went up and down
I heard nothing
Voice so sensual and soft like velvet the attraction was chilling
Presence, so magical, it kept my heart going like respirators
I wanted more of you
You pleasured my reason
And tickled my fancy with your dazzling swag
How could I resist
You had me
That night your thoughts blossomed in my heart like flowers do in the spring
Went to bed with just one thought
I want to see you again and again
I love this poem. You really captured the essence of Young Love. I definitely agree with Ms. Nivedita Truly ~Arimoko Konshei
Hi David, Your poem is very well written. Rich with detail and visuals ^.^ It's relatable and I love how I can really paint a picture in my head as a I read :)
love..yes i found it in this poem, its full of it. this poem is great..thank you..(' v') V
great piece; you capture the essence of young love I could see that young man blushing :) 10/10
awesome work David it really does deserve a ten, I was enthralled.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Emotion in exuberance… ‘Went to bed with just one thought/I want to see you again and again’ ~ Who can resist such appeal…seductive alluring…all elements are elementally enticing…pure vibe … thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10