Any Man With Money Can Have One ....... [very Short; Not Personal (Really): A Romantic Evening; Humor] Poem by Bri Edwards

Any Man With Money Can Have One ....... [very Short; Not Personal (Really): A Romantic Evening; Humor]

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The night was young, the wine was old,
inside was warm, outside was cold.
The dance was slow, and I was bold.
My heart beat fast. Her hair was gold.
My two hands...... were on her waist.
Her two eyes said...“make haste, make haste.'

If YOU envy me, then drop a load;
pick up a “babe” where dolls are sold.

(August 28,2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
THIS is mostly from my imagination...really! 'load' refers to a good sum of money.....not that i would know how much. there is a good reason why 'babe' and 'dolls' share the same line. any questions? ?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 15 May 2014

Bri You did not waste ink on this poem.nice work

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Poetheart Morgan 30 November 2013

Ah! no any questions! ! ! ! ! Very romantic! ! ! ! ! Smilings here! ! !

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Noreen Carden 29 November 2013

Hi Bri what kind of dolls are you speaking of i just worry you will end up in the dog house on a permanent basis. enjoyed reading as usual

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Wahab Abdul 27 November 2013

wow! so sweet a poem it is, it is your credit to write this kind poetry...and i must say this style is different from your earlier most of the poems.. kudos.. i love it

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Bri Edwards 27 November 2013

i forgot to include in my poet note that, when i wrote the poem in a paper notebook several months ago, i wrote waste instead of waist. how many of you would have corrected me, I WONDER. :)

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