marine currents swirl
deep-slippery shadows wave
beneath the sunlight
Hello poet Mihaela. Absolutely beautiful, I enjoyed, Loyd
Hello Mihaela! The haiku is always a poem which can stand as pure observation, with maybe a quiet meditation implied or stated. That's how I read this, but then I wondered if something more threatening was meant. Certain words took on danger: could the swirling mean danger? Am I over-reacting or is there peril in paradise? (I hope not.)
An insightful haiku nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
Muse! Beneath the sunlight; with the ways of nature. nice work.
Fantastic magery, one of my favourite forms of poetry.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful Haiku! Shadows and unseen currents, in dusky colors. Very-very interesting! (: