Aquarium Of Hope Poem by Bernedita Rosinha Pinto

Aquarium Of Hope

Rating: 4.3


Man moves with the wind assisting his respiration
hope moves man in finding his way and direction;
love keeps forgetting its existence and action
truth keeps circling the heart for its perception;

man plans and prays for momentum and motivation
but like a gold fish in an aquarium man feels isolation
when those whom he beckons lack redemption
and overturn their own jug of justice and rectification;

yet man keeps daring the future with determination
he overcomes all hurdles and storms with preparations;
and whether he wins or not the game of implementation
he never dissuades himself from his plans of objections;

he will run, he will chase until it is time for jubilation
and whether it is loss or gain, birth or burial as option,
man never fears to live, love or try new permutations;
for in the pursuit of victory there is never any limitation
when man is the gold fish swimming with noble inclination.

Aquarium Of Hope
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 April 2019

Hope! ! With determination. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hey Poet, Do you know that you are in the List of Top 500 Poets? When will I make it there? All my Poems are so good! Best Regards to you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 April 2019

" In the pursuit of victory there is never any limitations" . Grand conceptualization. Congrats on well deserved poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar, Thank you for your encouraging words. It is only when a bird finds it's broken wings not permitting it to fly, helplessness takes over but man never gives up his pursuit for justice and success. This is what life is all about.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 April 2019

A wonderful poem imbued with wisdom. Very inspiring. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Congratulations!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2021

But like a gold fish in aquarium... beautiful poetic exprei.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 February 2021

A wonderful poem! Appreciated...Top score!

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Varsha M 28 May 2020

Explicit poetry. Every word touched the heart Instilling hope that was lost. Very encouraging poem. Awesome beautiful. Appreciations.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 April 2020

Gold fish swimming with noble inclinations" . Superb conceptualization in the beautifully penned inspirational life song. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2020

man never fears to live, love or try new permutations; for in the pursuit of victory there is never any limitation when man is the gold fish swimming with noble inclination. Noble inclination that drives a human being to greatness. a very fine poem. tony

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