Arrogance Poem by David DeSantis

Arrogance

Rating: 4.1


In my mind,
I was a shark in the water,
Deep beneath the listless cold,
Testing vibrations
While waiting for prey.

In reality,
I was all too drunk,
Slurring speech, mind,
And thought patterns
With circuit broken movement.

A funny concept
To never quite grasp
how you are unintentionally
perceived:

The other night,
Drunk again:

“Your friends think you’re a piece of shit”


I always thought I had a way with words.


Copyright (c) David DeSantis

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 April 2008

For people to understand what makes us the way we become, they have to listen with there eyes...not just their ears. Just a pitty my eyes see double some days :) Great poem... all the best J.L

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There's a lot more to this clever piece than meets the eye, if one chooses to take it. I'm glad I'm going through a sober period. t x

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Tai Chi Italy 28 April 2008

Yes booze does make us do and say all sort of both stupid and painfully true things sometimes David and I do agree, it is amazing we never remember how appauling we were the night before! Great fun, letting your hair down occasionally though huh? Not sure about the title, as being arrogantly drunk doesn't really define the arrogance of some in my minds eye, but it does suit the drunk for sure. Nice to read some poetry dealing with real issues of modern life, smiling at you, soberer than any Judge! lol Tai

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Michael Campbell 28 April 2008

i know this situation well. no concept of self. a great one.

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Onelia Avelar 29 April 2008

a shark...Testing vibrations While waiting for prey... i like this imagery very much even if sober :)

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Ted Sheridan 08 May 2008

Years ago I had a friend who worked as a copywriter with me...he would always call late at night to tell me he had come up with the perfect format for our clients. I used to go to bed trusting he did, only to find out the next morning that he had been drunk and then forgot to write it down....

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Jurietta Duraan 06 May 2008

Excellen poem, David... it is clear from the many comments you receive... you are very good with words. It seems men are arrogant... women just lose their inhibitions!

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Original Unknown Girl 06 May 2008

Interesting piece this one. On the one hand I actually find arrogance quite appealing (strange as it seems) , on the other, mixed with alcohol it can have quite a different effect. And you've demonstrated this marvellously. HG: -) xx

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Emancipation Planz 02 May 2008

You do.... and this teatotaller remembers them! !

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Flora Gillingham 02 May 2008

Oh dear! I think I met you the other night. Spoke very eloquently - it's just that every other word was 'f*****g'. Pity he didn't have your self awareness (when sober) ! Good and self-deprecating as always. Fx

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