Isolation At Sunrise
Rating: ★3.1
I awake,
Dreams burdened with your eyes.
A recollection of temperance
From a soul as empty
as the spirits in a glass.
My mind remains heavily weighted,
with unfair remnants
of celestial lies.
Dreams burdened with your eyes.
A recollection of temperance
From a soul as empty
as the spirits in a glass.
My mind remains heavily weighted,
with unfair remnants
of celestial lies.
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Wednesday, April 9, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,sad
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COMMENTS
Ben Gieske
31 January 2009
Masterly done. I really like the following: Dreams burdened with your eyes, a soul as empty
as the spirits in a glass, and unfair remnants of celestial lies. You used common images but not in a trite way.
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
28 January 2009
This is simply amazing. Stunning piece you have here. Awe-inspiring. Five thumbs up and two stars.
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Chitra -
19 November 2008
I sometimes wish
I was a glass.
It’s easier to break without a soul
these lines are a masterpiece...
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Raynette Eitel
13 July 2008
This is an amazing poem 'From a soul as empty as the spirits in a glass' then followed by 'I sometimes wish I was a glass...' Nice work. But shouldnt it be I wish I WERE a glass? Your images are honed in, not overdone and you have caught the feeling in just a few words, as every poet should do.
Raynette
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Delilah Miller
10 July 2008
Strange how an empty glass of alochol can make things so much heavier. It was frustrated and deep blue. Keep writing,
Delilah
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~ Jon London ~
08 May 2008
This is so deep, it reminds us all of how fragile we are, I wish sometimes that our hearts were wrapped in bubble wrap..
I hope yours will be looked after, and treated with the respect it's deserves.
best wish you you bro...another fine write by Mr Desantis..keep it going
Jon
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Onelia Avelar
29 April 2008
I sometimes wish
I was a glass.
It’s easier to break without a soul...Wow, this lines are crystal clear and beautiful! ! No comment.
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Sarah Abdullah
27 April 2008
I sometimes wish
I was a glass.
It’s easier to break without a soul.
WOW
It's Really Really Deep..and the words are sooo Wonderful
Thx alot for sharing
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
25 April 2008
Mister DeSantis? 'Isolation at Sunrise' is to 'classic' as crystal is to glass.
What a wonderful piece of art this is. I enjoyed reading this. The style,
subject matter and your 'touch' has produced a 'memory'. You have captured
the essence of a craftsman's skill....and 'delivered' an awesome 'work'!
Beautiful.
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