Dustbin goes blue, grass
Littered with peel; revellers
colour blind, walk past...
how color blindedness can hamper the vision (and not sight) is truly captured here...loaded with meaning..your words do the magic again...
This reads more than a Senryu...much insight into this piece...
Art of selective phrasing...10
But some people are partially colourblind
Some people cannot identify and distinguish colour or shades of blue--we call them teal in UK what is sky-blue catchy term in India, in Italy-Azure
deep blue is Turquoise in UK and it varies from place to place
pale blue is Light Teal....................in that sense
So if some1 have had my sensibility in the dustbin of blue-i won't be worth grass littered in peel--a good emphatic write
But your creative vision is always
20/20, dear Mamta. Perception
is a gift, after all. Merry Christmas.
again a senryu well defined
Nice perspective... Liked the style.
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