Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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As A Friend

Rating: 4.9

Can you tell me as a friend?
Where life starts and world end
May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
Will not everyone laugh at me with pity?

Am I carried away by simple look?
Is it purely decoy and luring hook?
As fishes near the food and caught
Battle is lost without being fought

Why I only saw emerging fresh hope
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Ajith K Subramanian 20 November 2009

deep emotions.... a good one..

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Ezna Stephna 07 November 2009

Can you tell me as a friend where life starts and world end as a friend i tell you life starts when you recognizes yourself who you are in this beautiful world..... life is changelling without any strings tie its ends when you allow to ends it are very strong image poem that you sharing.......thank you 10+++

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Subbaraman N V 06 November 2009

When one learns to live with the realities of life, world and life will be worth living without any pains and pangs!

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

Is the desire root cause of problem? Can any nation survive without its emblem? Is it not the earnest feeling and desire? Will we not be failing to praise and admire? very nice piece, wonderful rhymes 10++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 03 November 2009

Good job...well written

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John Oconnell 05 March 2010

very human. it is certainly not 'wrong to offer solace and stand as rock'. john

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2010

oh this poem make me think about life and is a good poem to feel everything that i have through...i love this

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Dulakshi Wakista 24 February 2010

well expressed.Very deep emotional poem.Indeed it's a great work.Thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 01 December 2009

deep, of high emotional value...10+

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Yulissa Fregoso 29 November 2009

the emotions are felt a vrey amazing poem

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