As A Friend Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As A Friend

Rating: 4.9


Can you tell me as a friend?
Where life starts and world end
May I fail to catch glimpse of beauty?
Will not everyone laugh at me with pity?

Am I carried away by simple look?
Is it purely decoy and luring hook?
As fishes near the food and caught
Battle is lost without being fought

Why I only saw emerging fresh hope
Earnest desire with balanced walk on rope
Was that not open challenge to face?
Soon to fade out and out of race

Fine attempt to survive with glory and pride
Mo mixing of words and emotions to hide
Every angle has different stories to tell
How many may succeed with ends so well

Is it wrong to offer solace and stand as rock?
Morning alarm voice from creature like cock
Setting aside them as mere sign of weakness
Live pulse push to meet and feel oneness

Is the desire root cause of problem?
Can any nation survive without its emblem?
Is it not the earnest feeling and desire?
Will we not be failing to praise and admire?

Countless questions raging peaceful mind
Solution not in sight and answers never find
Can you not act wise and be so kind?
I shall promise to stay not as blind

I found you with His blessings and grace
Life would have been challenge and hurdles to face
Should have fallen out of grace to face ordeal
Wounds would have aggravated without hope to heal

I may end this by not saying good bye
You may not be seen as birds go and fly
It was earnest attempt and try
I will accept it as fate and never cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clara Odelia Ciutara 01 November 2009

I enjoy reading this poem, as a friend truth must be told, and as a friend evrything is everything. Nicely composed.

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Sahar Sahar 02 November 2009

An enjoyable and beautiful poem to read

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Nivrutti Avhad 02 November 2009

beautiful poem by you sir really nice

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Shamik Kumar Bose 02 November 2009

A great read, a beautiful verse. Lyrical. Great thoughts flow.10

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Mohammed Hassan 02 November 2009

nicely written, very good thoughts and very perfect use of words keep it up

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John Oconnell 05 March 2010

very human. it is certainly not 'wrong to offer solace and stand as rock'. john

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2010

oh this poem make me think about life and everything...it is a good poem to feel everything that i have through...i love this

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Dulakshi Wakista 24 February 2010

well expressed.Very deep emotional poem.Indeed it's a great work.Thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 01 December 2009

deep, of high emotional value...10+

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Yulissa Fregoso 29 November 2009

the emotions are felt a vrey amazing poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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