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*as If To...........

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I go along the deep forest
as if to count all the trees!
I fly soaring above and above
as if to count the stars in the sky!
I sail fast in the deep sea
as if to count the number of fishes in the blue waters!
I walk slow in the cool Tar desert
as if to count the sand grains on the earth!
I know fully well that I may not succeed
as I try to keep the society peaceful and prosperous!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sheer inability to achieve certain things in life leading to frustration- cause of this scribbling!
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very pleasant and enjoyable poem...I like the way it is written by the poet..Great!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 June 2015

Good imagery and finest conept

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

A Great poem with Great message....If I try to keep the society peaceful and prosperous...Beautifully expressed. Loved reading it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 April 2013

very nice.what ever be the result one should not keep trying.liked it.

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Kavya . 03 April 2013

how true sir...there are certain things in life which is out of our reach, yet we feel so restless to achieve it....great write....

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 April 2013

Inspirational walk through through Thar desert.Well done Sir.

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