Asher …… [a Little Boy’s Words; True; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Asher …… [a Little Boy’s Words; True; Short]

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Asher was a little boy of THREE ……,
about whom my stepdaughter ….. told me.
She and her mom met him at a party,
and both thought he was a little ‘smarty’.
‘Smarty’ as in a boy with facts to share.
I believed her, though I was not there.

He said he lived where there were sheep.
I think “sheep” is what she said; I was NOT asleep!
And he had a dog, in fact a great BIG dog,
and Asher said he also had at home a frog.

And at the party, up a mountain drive [steep],
were windows, outside which the owner did keep ….
several hummingbird feeders to feed those tiny birds,
the birds almost too amazing to describe with words.

Rufous hummingbirds, nearly half a dozen,
came to the feeders. They came ……., their tiny wings buzzin’.
Someone watching the feeders said “hummingbird”,
and after a while little Asher, too, said the word.

Yes, the little guy impressed Nona. It is true.
[BUT I probably impressed MORE people when I was …..TWO! ]

(May 16, 2015)

Saturday, May 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the story is true, including the frog. as best i recall. but the most interesting part about this is...........
i was told the story a week or longer ago, i wrote the poem today, and later today i ran across the name ASHER [which i had never heard before, that i'm sure of] in my weekly magazine which came in the mail today. so much for coincidences with words; these coincidences happen to me once in a while. some of them are even MORE remarkable (?) than this one.

does that happen to YOU? ? bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quoth Theraven 16 October 2020

Gotta love hummingbirds. Even cats do., if for all the wrong reasons. QtR

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Tom Allport 09 July 2017

a lovely poem of how young children quickly learn and say about the many happenings through out what would seem to them a very long day? ............wonderfully penned Bri.

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Ging Taping 25 May 2015

Yes it also happen to me often times.. And you are probably impressed MORE people when you are two :) I also did all eyes are on me since I am the oldest grandchildren

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