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indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
indira babbellapati
visakhapatnam, india
Thursday, October 29, 2009

At The Beginning Of A Winter

Rating: 3.4
strangely the environs
wore a deserted look
though it's homeward-time
on a mildly chill road
a vehicle or two passed
by us on that early evening
as gentle and visible
darkness descended

we walked in silence
on either side of the ambling road
nothing really pressing upon us

we assured the other
of one's presence
as we once in a way
...looked at each other!

29oct2009
11.21hrs
indira babbellapati
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COMMENTS
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 15 November 2009
a lovely wintry poem! a good description...
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Braja K Sarkar 15 November 2009
Lovely! Beautiful poem! I like this very much..Let Spring comes & stay in our lives for ever..
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Kesav Easwaran 10 November 2009
'nothing really pressing upon us'...yes; the distance between helps out...parrellel lives...joint journey nice work...thanks...10
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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009
'We walked in silence on either side of the ambling road' Rachel Ann Butler
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Deodath Debideen 03 November 2009
Winter is indeed a bleak time. Vitamin D3 does lift your spirits!
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Patrick A. Martin 02 November 2009
I wonder sometimes about the winter and how we express her presence. Each garden finds winter different, Some find her cold others believe her distant whilst for some gardens this is a time to die and wait to be reborn again in spring, -! 0 How extaoridinary your poetry is Indira Thank you.
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 01 November 2009
only you can write like that. so beautiful marks 10
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 October 2009
a poem that floats so wonderfully! thank you.
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such a romatic expression.............kudos!
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Ranjit Ravindran 29 October 2009
Nice way of welcoming winter.... Both comforting and reassuring. A sweet 10.
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