Attitude Poem by lady grace

Attitude

Rating: 4.8


ants
work night and day
gather foods for rainy days
busy bodies they are
collecting provisions for family

bees are different too
they travel in far places
sucking nectars from plants' stock
and return successfully packed.

arachnids are unique
“She kills he” and eat
oh pity arachnids
they die after they mate

most peculiar are “we”
can share our thoughts suitably
can love... can have freedom
can be the best if we want...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 17 September 2009

Humans fight..they break each other hearts Maybe animals are better than us.. good write

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 September 2009

Some people do things with ease, for some people events are hard.

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John Knight 17 September 2009

Hi Lady Grace - Nice Poem! 'Ants' 'Bees' 'Spiders' really beautiful specimens of God's craetion we can learn a lot from them! The ANTS work ethic the BEES organisatio and the SPIDERS spinning webs of allurement and intrigue and demonstrating the ultimate in Women's Lib! The poem has excellent structure and flow. The final stanza throws the ball back in our court what are our strengths? 1. Thought sharing - lovely - and a lovely opportunity with PH. 2. Love - that is the raison d'etre of life - to love and be loved.3. Be free - that is our prayer for the whole Human Race. 4. Be the best - YES! However we do have choices - so its up to us to Share - to Love - to be Free - to be the Best - how do you choose? . It is a perfect poem from a lovely Lady so I score it MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

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C. P. Sharma 17 September 2009

Beautiful variations in attitude and beautifully penned. In our case the choice swings between Ulusses and Lotus-eaters. CP

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I liked this angle of this poem Grace. The creatures you write about so well, all take their part in nature's plan as it is instinctive, and we should too but we also have the choice to do more for humanity than we already do. Well expressed. 10 Karin

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 September 2009

Sound different but written well. That's true and beautiful Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Akram Awadat 29 September 2009

interesting and good writing 10

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Patrick McFarland 27 September 2009

Excellent poem. Particularly the last stanza: 'most peculiar are “we' can share our thoughts suitably can love... can have freedom can be the best if we want' Ironic how given a choice, some choose hate over love and enslaving others over freedom.10+++

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Ken E Hall 20 September 2009

Your clever insight into the insect world how hard they work...busy bodies... Tenacity is the glue we need to keep on the right track..like your thoughts on the subject ++++10 regards

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Rehana Nazli 18 September 2009

eautiful comparison of life styles and struggles of tiny creatures like ants and bees with humans. We are the best!

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