Aurora Borealis Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Aurora Borealis Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Dancing Northern Lights

glow painting the evening sky

touch mythic transport



Eskimo legend has it if you sing to and touch the flashes of the Aurora Borealis it will transport you to another dimension or dreamstate to meet ethereal beings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 24 November 2008

For me this is absolutly perfect...thank you

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Indira Babbellapati 24 November 2008

how i wish the legend becomes true!

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Linda Winchell 24 November 2008

All one needs to transport themselves to another dimension is the Holy Spirit! I find myself stepping out of my physical body a lot. Better place to be I think? But I do like the idea of touching the Northern lights or just being there to view the beauty. Ten for this one Miss Lorraine! God Bless, Linda

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Irene Clark-hogg 31 July 2009

A poem of nature, a true haiku. Very nice indeed. Irene

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Chuck Audette 10 June 2009

Very cool. Thanks for the footnote, too. -chuck

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 February 2009

very nicely chosen words pictured the display of lights beautifully.. on nature's putting on show really captivating..... 10++

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Enrique Souffle 02 January 2009

Very nice. More writers should develop their talent with these short Japanese forms.

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Ocean Soul Haiku 06 December 2008

This is lovely... filled with colour and wonder and mystery...

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