Fiona Davidson

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Autumn Dreaming - Poem by Fiona Davidson

Trees drip rivers of colour from branches
Bared towards the granite skies above me
Reds and golds float freely to the ground
Forming a carpet so rich beneath my feet

Autumn walks through the wooded vales
Reveal the beauty of this planet we live on
As we watch the seasons turn and take us
We are back in primeval years of evolution

In our minds the rawness makes us alive
Breathing the salty tang of seas eternal
The never ending crash upon our shores
Reminding of its power over our lives

A smile appears as I look out to horizons
I once believed were lost in misty times

Comments about Autumn Dreaming by Fiona Davidson

  • (10/8/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    beautiful autumn picture you paint with this poem - lovely (Report) Reply

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  • (11/16/2009 5:30:00 AM)

    Hi Fi
    How are things
    Been a while I know.
    Anyway I am back LOL
    This is a lovley verse
    10 Plus
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  • (11/9/2009 1:05:00 PM)

    A smile appears as I look out to horizons
    I once believed were lost in misty times

    lovely autumn poem Fi, thanks...Maggie
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  • (11/9/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    Your exceptional talent to vividly capture scenes of nature with your words shines brightly in this wonderfully imagninative poem, Fi, and it was a great pleasure to read. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2009 6:48:00 PM)

    I like this autumn song and especially the ending is just perfect. (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    dreaming lovely write so vivid 10 (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (11/8/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    Beautifully done, with awesomely brilliant and colorful imagery. Reminds me why Autumn if my favorite season. Thanks for this little glimpse of mother nature's majesty.

    Linda :)
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 11, 2011

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