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Avoid-Aholic

Rating: 4.4

The workaholic
works twelve hours a day
then rushes home
and squanders all his pay
buying bottles of hard booze
trying to drink away his blues
Can't even make it
to his daughters school play
because he is far away
working all day everyday

maybe one day he will realise
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 14 May 2013

It depends on whether you work to live, or, live to work. The boundaries are easily corroded.

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Nader Baheri 14 May 2013

great work.with clear subject and the message.working is a liquor for a workaholic person.we need to work to earn money but there are always something more than working.~nb

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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Well penned poem

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great work Allen... a nice truth of life..

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Aldrich Suarez 18 May 2013

A lesson within your poem.....I like it....yeahbsolutely! : D

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Scotty Dogg 16 May 2013

I voted 9. Pretty darned good!

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Buxton Shippy 15 May 2013

The truth from a poet's pen. I voted 9/10 for this...

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