Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Rookie (11/26/1971 / New York)

Awakening (An Erotic Tanka) - Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

lovers eyes are wide,
mind fevered with want and kiss...
allows warm waking
of transmitted messages
folded, seeping desire.


Comments about Awakening (An Erotic Tanka) by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

  • Elya Thorn (12/17/2006 1:23:00 AM)

    Oh, I love this one! Too bad it's so short! :)

    Elya Thorn
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (12/17/2006 12:52:00 AM)

    Sensually eloquent, Eila.....Nicely done, as per usual
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 11, 2010


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