Manonton Dalan

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Ay! Paludip (I Follow Deep) - Poem by Manonton Dalan

unseen touch
softer than a kiss
left me in whirpool
full of desire to feel
again

i waited
empty but throbbing
to mysterious feelings
emebering to tempo
of longing

i follow deep
tracing back stolen glances
from spring budding morn
with open lips comes

girl, you’re awesome
and i love you

ay! paludip = i follow deep
= stolen glances


Comments about Ay! Paludip (I Follow Deep) by Manonton Dalan

  • Miriam Maia Padua (1/10/2009 10:01:00 PM)

    sweet lines with very romantic words
    and amusing at the end....nice
    ay! paludip....
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  • (9/30/2008 7:29:00 PM)

    nice poem! ok..... follow deep.........hmmmmmmmmmm. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/21/2008 9:36:00 AM)

    very nice, love your 'pups'! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 17, 2008


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