(b) 6 (Pain/Longing) I Just Want To Close My Eyes Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(b) 6 (Pain/Longing) I Just Want To Close My Eyes

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I just want to close my eyes
And rest for a while
For my soul to break all the ties
Catch its breath and go the next mile
And begin a new chapter of my life....

I just want to close my eyes
And listen to the sound of silence
After the heaving sighs and cries
of my heart, readying to commence
And begin a new chapter of my life....

I just want to close my eyes
And just be overcome by sleep
Catch up on the sleepless nights and sighs
Of my longing for you, now ready to sweep
And begin a new chapter of my life...

I just want to close my eyes
And just dream
Where my soul is flying high
Amongst white clouds where purity reigns supreme
And begin a new chapter of my life....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kavitha Krishnamurthy 19 November 2006

That was a very touching poem. Good one...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 November 2006

T.O.>>>A beautiful piece of work, as expected from a talent such as you... The hits keep comin'.....FOR YOU! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }

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Linda Ori 16 November 2006

Oh, how I know that feeling! So touching, and painful - your words certainly touched my heart. You describe the feeling perfectly. Linda

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Patricia Gale 16 November 2006

A flow that creates a dreamy state for the reader.... well done.

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R H 16 November 2006

A wonderfully dreamy write TO, the flow of this piece is echoes it's mood perfectly - lovely poem. Justine

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