! Baby Haiku Poem by Linda Ori

! Baby Haiku

Rating: 2.8


A human blossom
Blooming with the breath of life -
Totally awesome

Mother sleeps in peace
Weary from the long ordeal -
All her worries cease

Father holds his son
Tears of pride now overflow -
All his fears undone

Life begins anew
Things will never be the same -
No more sleep for you!


7/18/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 18 July 2008

this collection of haikus...very nice...all give good imageries of life.10..

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Danny Reynolds 18 July 2008

Love the I and 3 rhyme Linda. Danny; ¬)

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Coach Roth 18 July 2008

Wonderful...nicely builds from life to life to no sleep...Coach

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* Sunprincess * 09 August 2015

....very nicely done, beautiful poem ?

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Chitra - 03 December 2008

very well done, how very vivid..!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

A beautiful poem. I read so many poems on kids. But this one exudes a matured write with very good metaphors/similies.

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Ivor Hogg 19 September 2008

so much said in so few words of A haiku string

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

Ammmmazing indeed! ...............10

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