Baby I love you 10 + +
I love you like the earth loves grass
Baby I love you very much
Keep my life warm with your sweet touch
Baby I love you more than dad
Loving you makes me more than glad
Baby I love you more than mom
You are my water of Zamzam
Baby I love you less than God
But you are my home and abroad
so great and beautiful written. i love all the parts of this work so fresh and wise.
Great rhythm, nice meaning and well written..everyone knows u can write well Asif, keep it going_SOul
Great write with lovely flow and thythm and very interesting notes on the ZamZam! !
A deeply pround expression of love 10++- I love the rhymning couplets.
the last couplet is my favorite, it is smewhat to me comical and irony, great job :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yeah excellent one again.....and the lines Baby I love you more than mom You are my water of Zamzam Baby I love you less than God But you are my home and abroad is superb! ! »so close«