They broke your back
And hurt you so
Neglecting you
Whilst you would grow
They treated you
As if you were dirt
Walked all over you
And made you hurt
Your delicate bones
Fell to shatters
Your parents said
It didn’t matter
I can’t believe
They stole your life
And ended it
Without a strife
I wish that we
Had seen before
But now baby P
You are no more
So rest in peace
Doomed from the start
But you’re with god now
And in our hearts
I know many have written about baby P, but i thought i'd put it in my own words. It isnt intended, but if this is even a bit offensive, i didnt mean it at all.
Rest in peace baby P
what is offensive is what they put that child through, your poem shows how much you care in your heart. well wrote and i for one feel blessed that you shared thanks you baby p needs our prayers
A beautiful poem in Honour of a Child who was starved of Love.... a cruel world we live in that's for sure 10/10
Great poem so sad..... Great write Krista
You have said it beautifully about this poor unfortunate child... how anyone can do this to a baby is beyond my understanding. Well done, Amy.
What a sad sad piece. Even the thought of someone hurting a child sets my blood on fire. How can anyone do such a thing. Nicely written
a very heart felt piece of beautiful poetry and so well said such a tender poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ur words r gentle and no one is offended u cannot hurt a fly even if u intended reading this poem i couldn`t stand i just fell and stayed on the ground