Being Me Poem by Amy

Being Me

Rating: 2.9


I am a girl
Nothing more
Trying to tell the world
Not to close the door

I am a peace maker
Trying to help
Speaking openly to the people
Making hearts melt

I’m an overachiever
Trying to get good grades
I work as hard as I can
Keep promises made

I am a Christian
I go to church with my friend
I wish that my childhood
Would never end

I am a girl
I like to do what I can
I am me
......................
I am who I am

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Winters 29 October 2008

YOU ARE JUST BEING YOURSELF AND THERE'S NOTHIN WRONG WITH THAT SO IF ANY BODY HAS A PROBLEM WITH IT........FORGET THEM I LOVED IT........AMAZING PIECE

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 25 September 2008

Be true to yourself and be proud of it. Great poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

a good girl who knows who she is...a good poem that this good girl writes...10 for you and for your poem, Amy...

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Roy Storey 21 September 2008

Its the only way be true to yourself. a nice poem.

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Tj Becker 20 September 2008

A girl that knows who she is and where she's going, great poem I loved the last part. 'I am who I am '.......not everyone does know haha cool write

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Laura Arwen 18 March 2021

very simple poem. I like it

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Akram Saqib 02 July 2017

literature has no religion but alas you have eulogized it. any way feelings are excellently depicted

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Jack Price 18 April 2009

Just keep on writing your poetry Amy, I really like this poem and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems soon........

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Emancipation Planz 22 November 2008

.. and sweetest Amy.. I reckon I have also seen your hand prints on the moon... keep righting them, one peace at a time... aroha Deana xx

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Ron Flowers 03 November 2008

A very nice poem. It's so important to have the courage to honestly say who you are. After reading it, I would say you have every reason to be pleased with who you are. Ron

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