I Hate It When Poem by Amy
I Hate It When
I hate the way you smile at me
And how you make me freeze
I hate the way you make me laugh
I always was a tease
I hate the way you talk to me
The way I can’t resist
I hate the way you walk away
And cross me off the list
I hate the way you make me fall in love
Over and over again
I hate the way that its you
And none of the other men
I hate they way you walked out on me
And how you made me cry
But then I realise, I love everything about you
The thing is I don’t know why
Good stuff, Amy - relentless pace & keeps the reader on the edge of the seat. Keep it up!
That's such a good poem :) You're good at writing rhyme for your age. Keep going - the sky is limitless (so i was once told! !) x
Gr8 work.....love in the disguise of hate a whole 10 for this masterpiece
WE ARE RIGHT AROUND THE SAME AGE IM 16 AND I MUST SAY THIS POEM LOOKS AS IF A GROWN WOMAN WROTE IT OUTSTANDING POETRY I'M STARTING TO GET JEALOUS (LOL)
Unrequited love, adolescent angst! This brings back distant memories for me and is very expressively written! Many thanks, Amy. Is English Lit. your favourite subject?
very very good....really skilled for being only 15(i hate when people said that to me at 15 but I guess its my turn to be patronizing now at 23 haha) ! I think your going to have a great future in writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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9/22/2023 5:36:28 AM # 1.0.0.1113
a sweet way of telling how one loses out oneself in love! beautiful piece, Amy...good style and rhythm in the write...for your age your imaginative talent is really admirable...10+