Back In Paris Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Back In Paris

Rating: 5.0


Atop of the Effiel Tower on a sultry, smoggy afternoon
I took out a French cigarette and lit it up
The drag was sweet like yr kiss
But it isn't the only thing I remember
Yr indigo eyes were like the night
And yr blonde that might have gone gray
Or gone altogether
Anyway, it doesn't matter
Because it's yr smile I have been thinking of
The brightness of yr teeth could madr my heart sing
But it's all in the past
We departed without effort
And lived without thinking of each other
But now, that I am back in Paris
I hope you remember me

Tuesday, May 31, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: blind love,forbidden
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 31 May 2022

Oui, oui, mademoiselle, I remember you well. For you I really fell, and I was sick in the head when you left our bed and in the darkness fled.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 June 2022

This would make a great cowboy song!

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So light hearted, free spirited and thoroughly enjoyable, my dear friend LeeAnn! ...10

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Beautiful poem. Love and life are like that. Enjoyed the poem, LeeAnn. Top score

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Rebecca Navarre 10 June 2022

Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 10 June 2022

Sweeps my heart away! .. My goodness how beautiful and romantic! .. So heart touching! ..

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Cowboy Ron Williams 03 June 2022

Retrouve-moi au Regence Cafe à sept heures.

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Kevin Patrick 03 June 2022

It reminds me of an old black and white film, a continental romance story with star crossed lovers meeting by chance. An enchanting work its a cinematic love song!

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Richard Wlodarski 03 June 2022

What's the name of the film, , Kevin?

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me poet yeps poet 01 June 2022

GREAT ALL SAID MUST BE

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