As I travel
back in time
to where
it all began
I hear
People talking
of a ghostly figure
right near
where I am
I turn around
to see
but all there is, is me
Then someone
walks straight
Through me
and says
Someones
watching over me
An amazing poem....the flow of it was fantastic, genuinely beautiful!
I was wondering, what will I feel if I really traveled back in time... It will be a time when I will face myself and judge.. Well written! !
To me good inciteful poetry is not always written in long verse or many stanzas. You my friend pour so much into your style and it leaves the reader with thoughts to think as many of your fellow poets commented. Nicely done! ! ! J. L.
This reminds me of how I have had things happen to me that made no sense in regard to the laws of time, space, physics..but I can't deny them because they did happen to me, and to disregard them would mean I would have to totally not believe anything I saw or heard or detected with my physical senses. This makes me much more open to other people's odd experiences; I tend to believe now rather than question. Nice job here.
I really appreciate your writing style, Dave. It is concise and thought provoking. It really left me with a lasting feeling at the end of the page. Thank you for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well done Dave.Yes all the time we must have who gos through us, it's the judgement part of our self, that part which tell us about the right and wrong.