Beating Negativity With Positivity Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Beating Negativity With Positivity

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As I rise
through the ashes of life
I open my eyes
ready to fight

Look into my eyes
see no lies as I say
I can not be defeated

I will fight you
anyway you want me to
but beware I will defeat you
feel the power of positivity
running through my mind

I will defeat you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this for a friend.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 07 March 2014

A great message here Dave - it is all too easy to fall into negativity when life gets tough, and this is an excellent spur to us all that we can rise above it. Well said and well written. Hope your friend takes it on board.

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Rubab Atwal 10 March 2014

a beautiful poem with a great message....really inspiring

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Smoky Hoss 10 March 2014

Right on Dave, very well stated.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 March 2014

Good title and effective message, Dave...

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Kanav Justa 14 March 2014

, , , positivity has an amazing power, , , , , so does your poem, , powerful write, , ,

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Shahzia Batool 30 March 2014

I agree with Valsa ji, though it's not that easy but one can always hope for the best!

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Valsa George 25 March 2014

We have to wage an eternal battle to subdue negativity...! Bitter experiences tend to make us pessimistic.... but through fighting spirit and indefatigable will, we have to overpower our enemy and become positive! A fine write! !

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Gajanan Mishra 19 March 2014

power of positivity - great feeling, I like it. Please read my new poems and comment.

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Joseph Anderson 15 March 2014

That attitude should carry you far. The power of positive thinking, well defined is this brief and to the point write.Positively great

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 March 2014

Positive feeling brings success. Beautiful lines of verse. Thank you.

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