Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,795 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Beating Negativity With Positivity - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As I rise
through the ashes of life
I open my eyes
ready to fight

Look into my eyes
see no lies as I say
I can not be defeated

I will fight you
anyway you want me to
but beware I will defeat you
feel the power of positivity
running through my mind

I will defeat you

Topic(s) of this poem: art

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this for a friend.

Comments about Beating Negativity With Positivity by Dave Alan Walker

  • Shahzia Batool (3/30/2014 3:09:00 PM)

    I agree with Valsa ji, though it's not that easy but one can always hope for the best! (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (3/25/2014 11:22:00 PM)

    We have to wage an eternal battle to subdue negativity...! Bitter experiences tend to make us pessimistic.... but through fighting spirit and indefatigable will, we have to overpower our enemy and become positive! A fine write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (3/19/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    power of positivity - great feeling, I like it.
    Please read my new poems and comment.
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  • (3/15/2014 1:20:00 PM)

    That attitude should carry you far. The power of positive thinking, well defined is this brief and to the point write.Positively great (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/15/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    Positive feeling brings success. Beautiful lines of verse. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (3/14/2014 12:12:00 AM)

    , , , positivity has an amazing power, , , , , so does your poem, , powerful write, , , (Report) Reply

  • (3/11/2014 7:02:00 PM)

    Good title and effective message, Dave... (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2014 5:02:00 PM)

    Right on Dave, very well stated. (Report) Reply

  • (3/10/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem with a great message....really inspiring (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (3/7/2014 5:35:00 PM)

    A great message here Dave - it is all too easy to fall into negativity when life gets tough, and this is an excellent spur to us all that we can rise above it. Well said and well written. Hope your friend takes it on board. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 12, 2014

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