Avoid Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Avoid

Rating: 4.9


Slayers of happy thoughts
Slayers of free will
People who just wait
for you to have a fall

Mind controlling freaks
who think they deserve it all
We all know people like this
Try to avoid them all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silentpoet Grl 27 December 2011

Wise words, so very true... Great poem!

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Shinichi Ohashi 27 December 2011

Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

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Anthony Han 27 December 2011

Short simple and wonderful

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Mensah Abraham Afedzi 27 December 2011

very matured.very brilliant.very precise n exact.good.

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Kemi Kemms 27 December 2011

Too many people like that around us! ! I like the poem, true, short and tells it all! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 August 2013

Wow..Wonderful write with great message...Loved reading it.

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Ruby Honeytip 10 December 2012

Working on it Dave.....working on it: -)

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(De Va) 14 August 2012

well written with great advice....blessings

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Little Wolf 26 March 2012

This is the one i'll do a song for I love it! Fantastic poem!

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2012

Simple, understandable poem - so true, thre world is full of people like this!

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