Heart of Ice Die Die Die

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Back To Before / I Love You Four - Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

I wish things
would just go back
to the way they were.
Before her
Before summer
Before my stupid mistake
But they can't
and they won't ever.
She changed you
more then you think.
There are things
we both regret.
But regretting it
won't get us anywhere.
But if I can't have
before
then why can't I have
a now?
Because I have no luck and I'm Irish?
Really? Are you sure it's not?
Because I'm a horrible person?
Huh. That one usually works. Well then.
Is it because of her?
About fucking time!
I'm sorry,
but I'm gunna keep trying.
I love you,
and I know you love me four.


Nove.23-09


Comments about Back To Before / I Love You Four by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

  • (12/14/2009 5:18:00 PM)


    wow sounds like you have some serious guilt.it was reallly good and insitefull (Report) Reply

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  • (12/13/2009 3:16:00 PM)


    wow you sound like you were cheated and sounds hard; nice expressing it (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2009 1:02:00 PM)


    That was really captivating. I really like the idea behind this. Very cool. (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry (12/6/2009 10:39:00 AM)


    it is just impatience..
    with the rose..
    that blooms in spring..
    and comes with fall...iip
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 13, 2009


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