Blood Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Blood

Rating: 5.0


I opened my heart to you
And you stabbed it through with a knife
and you said: I love you forever, please understand.
The last words I heard as I took in my dying breath,
Uttered from your lips.
The last thing I saw, with my now glazed over eyes,
Was you
standing over me with the knife now bloody
with our blood.

Saturday, May 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: lips,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

This sounds painful... but good write

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Broken Heart 23 July 2009

koool! ! awesome! ! great

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Isaac Maliya 15 July 2009

The poem of relationships and their mood -swinging! I am spell-bound with it! Good one, Rachelle. Highly rated poem!

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~*Random Nightmare*~ 02 July 2009

Didnt' you wirte this the same day we trashed my jeans? ? Lol! Anyways! I loved it!

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