From dissonance to Harmony
Seeking the eternal Verity
The Clarity
Was back in my eyes
Share with me your Sincerity
Let me have
Peace and Prosperity
Time for
Uncertainty's demise
2010/1/17
Is fine poem, Nightingale Sometimes polarity - as self-defence for the lonely... Which fantastically reaches to harmony even at time of uncertainty..10... Best wishes, Tsira
I love the first line of your second stanza. 'Sincerity' is rare in the world of today. I agree with John. This is a profound write.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra
where u can c less of text and more of meaning u can c the nickname Nightingale
this is full of wisdom, delicate words used passionately....what a poem it is...wow is the word....now I shall also look for nightingale wherever the words are few and the meaning is deep.....
liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again
liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again
liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again
liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again
liked these lines: From dissonance to Harmony Seeking the eternal Verity it is a never ending search till death. is nt it? ? thank u for sharing ur poem thank u again
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Persian Nightingale - This is an elegant poem with good structure and content. I like the unusual rhyming pattern x a a b then a x a x b. This rhyme gives it excellent rhythm and flow. Waht are the qualities you are seeking to balance your polarity? V 2 In sound a move from Dissonance (lovely word) to Harmony and in sight to Verity and Clarity. V 2 A desire for a sincere sharing of Peace and Prosperity. If we achieve all these things it would result in 'Time for the demise of uncertainty'. Thanks for sharing I am sure others will find other gems in this very profound poem. I score it MAX (Ten) . Yours in Poetry - JOHN.