My full moon face, idol
Taking off her clothes bridal
Firstly two water lilies I saw
Later on a heart of stone
With a feeling of awe!
(2008/9/17)
A well written piece, I am always in awe of your poetry, you so so much in a few lines, 10 Lynda xx
actually i laughed a lot while reading this nicely decribed deception. +10 for this short one regards anjali
And too short, and nicely composed, and love it, and 10 for it.
small and proud, you wowed us all, thanks for your poem, now it's my time to go
That you feel to awe and respect before 'them, ' that only decorates your honour, it is very good/// Tsira
Ahh, short and sweet but says a lot, She's all that you have - ever sought! ! Best wishes Shiraz! 10 Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a feeling of amazement to discover a gift...like a painting so beautifully expressed which only the gifted has an EYE for that. a 10 for you.