My full moon face, idol
Taking off her clothes bridal
Firstly two water lilies I saw
Later on a heart of stone
With a feeling of awe!
a feeling of amazement to discover a gift...like a painting so beautifully expressed which only the gifted has an EYE for that. a 10 for you.
ha ha ha the 'Awe' is really a wow! of course +++10
A well written piece, I am always in awe of your poetry, you so so much in a few lines,
actually i laughed a lot while reading this
nicely decribed deception.
+10 for this short one
And too short, and nicely composed, and love it, and 10 for it.
small and proud, you wowed us all, thanks for your poem, now it's my time to go
That you feel to awe and respect before 'them, ' that only decorates your honour, it is very good///
a nice one. small but wholesome.
Dreamy poem! I love it!
Ahh, short and sweet but says a lot, She's all that you have - ever sought! !
Best wishes Shiraz! 10
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