Bang! Ouch! ....... [uses Of 'Bang', The Word; Funny/Not Funny; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bang! Ouch! ....... [uses Of 'Bang', The Word; Funny/Not Funny; Short]



Bang! was what I heard when the chair leg hit my toe.
ouch! ! was what I said....as toe-swelling began to show.

Bang! -up-time was what I had at X-mas party for my job.
Ouch! ! was what I said next morning....as my brain did throb.

BANG! is a Theory of how our Universe came about.
OUCH! ! is Religion’s response....when its beliefs are placed in doubt.

It’s likely none of THOSE bangs will cause you to drop dead,
but dead you might soon be....if a gun goes BANG! beside your head.

(June 19,2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i really don't remember, two months after writing this, what triggered me to write it. we have chairs in the house, but no guns.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 23 December 2016

and the moral is wear steal capped shoes, drink less or use a good hangover remedy, and sleep with a bullet proof vest over your head; or just go with the bang

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 August 2013

Guns. They are mostly deadly than be used to protect. I wrote a poem named Fight for what. Inside it i wrote againts guns.

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