Bare Panes Poem by Sandra Fowler

Bare Panes

Rating: 5.0


The moment is elusive as old verse.
Music only suggests its fragile self.
Moon drops fall beautiful upon bare panes
The chill dances through labyrinths of trees.

The ancient loveliness of autumn's lamp
patterns the night like lace on humankind.
You promise me the mood will never end.
Smoke swirls through stanzas of infinity.

Copyright,2008, Sandra Fowler

'With a special recommend from the editors
of 'World Poets Quarterly.China'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 12 October 2008

Sandra, wonderful composition, and word pictures. i like your style of expression.10 Warm Regards Mamta

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Danny Reynolds 24 September 2008

It never fails to amaze me, how many wonderful ways we have to conjure up our thoughts on paper. Lovely stuff Sandra. Danny

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premji premji 23 September 2008

sandra... wonderful lines... i wish the moonshine is with me all life... love.. premji

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 September 2008

Sandra, as per usual, you have captured the resplendent essence of imageries majique And, once again, your efforts serve as a paradigm for what the mind's eye of the accomplished Poet can see, and express....Fine Work, indeed, young lady! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 September 2008

another gem. i have a necklace of your gems.

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Patrick A. Martin 22 November 2009

It is when I read verse like this that I recognise you Child of the Ancient Poet.-10

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premji premji 23 May 2009

sandraji, some times real to the core and some times absolute surreal......always you keep wonders........

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Will Barber 11 February 2009

The haunting imagery leaves no doubt as to why this poem has been awarded plaudits the 'The World's Poets Quarterly'. You gift of combining color, sound and feeling shines here. - Will

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Bob Blackwell 31 December 2008

Simple, beautifully expressed.

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Tsira Goge 25 November 2008

Dear Sandra, it is Surprising poems, I am admired... from my 10x10 Best wishes, Tsira

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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