please be my vampire,
my blood is in these pages.
let my words be your drink
and my pain be your nourishment
I’m baring my jugular
to get it out of me and into you.
the more life you draw,
the greater my chance of immortality.
and the more I get on this page
the greater my chance of survival.
by shannon flanders
This one is great and full of meaning that tingle one's imagination. How I wish that you will be my vampire to sip the nectar of my wisdom that i could share to you the magic of my heart and the burning passion of my tender touch. thanks and best wishes, melvin
Shannon, it is an unusual analogy - but an effective one! Rgds, Ivan
Nice....I think I feel like this too. Have a great 08 L&R Gabe
Nice thought provoking poem. The essence and intricacies of creative writing are aptly captured in the poem. Lovely and brought work of art. Thanks for sharing.
but pain is unpleasant and nobody wants to feel so please stay away from the unpleasents of the now and live for the happiness yet to come
Very creative, I wish I had thought of this idea for a poem of mine. Can I steal it?
Wow, I love it, it is awesome. it has alot of detail.
I have come uninvited, sipped the mellifluous nectar coursing through the vein of your inner thought, and leave satiated, determined to return.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
^.^ oh i like this poem a lot, great imagery