Be My Vampire Poem by shannon wright

Be My Vampire

Rating: 4.6

please be my vampire,
my blood is in these pages.

let my words be your drink
and my pain be your nourishment

I’m baring my jugular
to get it out of me and into you.

the more life you draw,
the greater my chance of immortality.
and the more I get on this page
the greater my chance of survival.

by shannon flanders

Suicide King 08 January 2008

^.^ oh i like this poem a lot, great imagery

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Melvin Banggollay 07 January 2008

This one is great and full of meaning that tingle one's imagination. How I wish that you will be my vampire to sip the nectar of my wisdom that i could share to you the magic of my heart and the burning passion of my tender touch. thanks and best wishes, melvin

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Ivan Donn Carswell 07 January 2008

Shannon, it is an unusual analogy - but an effective one! Rgds, Ivan

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Gabriel SimpsonLaw 02 January 2008

Nice....I think I feel like this too. Have a great 08 L&R Gabe

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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

Nice thought provoking poem. The essence and intricacies of creative writing are aptly captured in the poem. Lovely and brought work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Joshua Burckhard 21 February 2008

but pain is unpleasant and nobody wants to feel so please stay away from the unpleasents of the now and live for the happiness yet to come

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2008

Very creative, I wish I had thought of this idea for a poem of mine. Can I steal it?

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Aj Carter 23 January 2008

Wow, I love it, it is awesome. it has alot of detail.

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Frank Cannon 09 January 2008

I have come uninvited, sipped the mellifluous nectar coursing through the vein of your inner thought, and leave satiated, determined to return.

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shannon wright

shannon wright

stuttgart, germany
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