Sky vis-a -vis the horizon
light creeps in...
a new day unravels before these eyes,
the axis of maelstrom...
Peeved- time winnowing unreality_
my limitations...
an entangled-self
Pen unleashing
words that elude me
screaming in silence to the wind
a spongy body, consuming
...the angst...
Can wisdom function in this walled- thought?
...wring the wind! ...
to unform this image of oneself
...to freedom! ...
an unfading color
of the rainbow...
dont worry about the wall...our thoughts can always build windows anywhere it liked
...very picturesque fiction... ...if you are still like this...I wan t your stillness...
poetry is larger than life, so goes the cliche... but it really is. brilliant thoughts..! kumusta...
I love your play on words - well, that's what poetry's all about, isn't it? - pen unleashing words that elude me.. can wisdom function in this walled thought.. worlds that cannot exist brought into existence. I manage such thoughts sometimes but they don't come out so smoothly, like these..i love this..a 10 all the way
well perfected reflection of life.... so candid... i love to read
words that elude me........ excellent selection of words. well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
break the walls explore the thought within unleashes the colors of desire embracing rainbow and our freedom would embark beyond horizon