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Beautiful Letdown

Rating: 3.2

We loved eachother
Our hearts were warm

You loved me
I loved you back

But the sands of time
Made our love lack

I needed you

And hated you also
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Amy Murtagh 10 December 2005

You can feel the honesty, and this I love.

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Crystal Johnson 18 November 2005

Wow...this was a very emotional poem. I really like this one too. Such strong feelings, but in a good way. Great poem

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Uriah Hamilton 13 May 2005

what did the love lack as a result of the sands of time? what was the token she gave back? The feeling and intensity is good.

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Kim McInnis 18 March 2005

This is a new theme; I like it. It's simple, but very sincere. My heart goes out to you.

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