Beautiful Morning...Witnessed By Whom? Poem by Almedia Knight-Oliver
Beautiful Morning...Witnessed By Whom?
There they lay watching the rising sun.
No more can night see daylight
than the darkness hide her anymore.
Desiring a new beginning, as the old world
was trying to slip away, then her hands opened...
She watched all those old things blend with the wind.
Now, we lay trapped between what was
and what is as those old things tried to appear.
The heavenly host turned off the light,
leaving those things in the dark, and
illuminating a brand new day bright
Many suns and moons old ways were the norms...
and I confirmed that time. now
I hold the key and its my turn, then opened
the door to let the bird wing free
Loudly dreaming!
I felt his arm
encircling my waist,
our lips obsessing.
Heat, need, and greed
gathered strong, braking chains,
opening doors...liken uninhibited fervor
the thieves took what they wanted...
Now what's next:
In the stillness of morning, she relaxes her eyes on his knee-length
nightgown with cute little black bears frolicking on the off-white back ground.
She wearing ruby red satin pajamas- top cozying up to her neck
making unnoticeable her flat scared chest... all the while the sun smiling
with favor, kissing her on each cheek.
Looking into each other's eyes they exchanged love-rings,
and placed them on each other's heart.
Sweet and salty tears flowed down the lines of a face veiling her time worn-beauty.
Looking into each other's eyes they leapt into the arms of bliss.
Two hearts joined like the blue sea and blue sky.
And humbly accepted each and every word and promise to love and cherish each other forever'
BY
ALMEDIA KNIGHT OR ASK
01/11/06
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Amazingly expressed piece my lovely...you capture this moment perfectly...Very well written, and with select imagery gives this wonderful poem...a classic touch....brilliant! !
Sadness flies on the wings of the morning and out of the heart of darkness comes the light.The poem is very well written with beautiful imagery that illuminates a vey pure message that laughter should lie in the sweetness of love and there should be full sharing of pleasures for in the dew of little things the heart finds its morning and is refreashed.
beautiful morning with visible rays of the sun.. beautiful morning to where a sun smiles.. a beautiful morning where lies becomes truths, , the possibility to rise is seen in the first dawn of the day...grace
what a passionate poem, so full of expression, really like this one, very well written, thank you: 0)
Passion and Romance exuding and oozing in the backdropp of finest imaginative metaphor…endlessly and relentlessly… Excellent sculpturing in the tune and tone of poetic excellence… ‘…Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon….’ And it is limitless and unfathomable like Love and Nature’s beauty… Thanks Ma’am… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
other’s eyes and leaped over the broom into the arms of bliss. … Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon. witnessed by holy spirit and nature and it has got bleesings for right act too.. beaiutiful write and appriciated...keep writng such beautiful poems....10 read mine bidding farewell... anywhere...butterflies around...mary to marry
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4/22/2024 12:10:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
'the light of day can't stay in hiding, as the old world slips away' amazing piece of work! ! ! 10++++