Behind Iron Bars. Poem by J.A McManus

Behind Iron Bars.

Rating: 5.0


As I peer through these cold iron bars
I can see the stars burning so bright
Oh yes! They burn so blindingly bright
Across the dark blue blanket of night.

As I peer through these cold iron bars
I yearn to soar like a silver kite
Oh yes! Just like a silvery kite
Across the dark blue blanket of night.

As I peer through these cold iron bars
I long to stroll under the starlight
Oh yes! To stroll under the starlight
Below the dark blue blanket of night.

As I peer through these cold iron bars
I know I’m lost in my own twilight
Oh yes! Lost in my own bleak twilight
Below the dark blue blanket of night.

Friday, October 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anne Unknown 03 November 2009

it was a great idea to repeat the the firt and last line. that was kind of the essence of the poem. inspirational...definetely well done.

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Excellent John. The repetition works so well and brings the imagery straight through my eyes into my heart. When I look from the bottom line, the last word night, has twilight twice above it. I love this poem. 10

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Obinna Eruchie 01 November 2009

How wonderful his view of the silver stars behind iron bars. Inspirational!

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Terence Nabbs 31 October 2009

hi john are feeling a bit closed in, nice poem, have you been a guest, or are u feeling a bit closed in as i say, terry

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Eyan Desir 31 October 2009

Fine lines good job..........

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J.A McManus

J.A McManus

Carlisle, Cumbria
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