Sighting her in opposite mirror
Like a boundless poetic mirage
Finding no words I surrender
To the beauty unfolding its image
Beauty seemed lesser in lily
To compare her to lotus was silly
No simile, metaphor or metonymy
Describe her fathomless beauty aptly
Ahh but you have described her beauty aptly, a very delightful read, indeed! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
I thought this was written too well. Sometimes, a poet, will reach a very great height in some lines and fall a little short in others. This writer has done just that. The form and substance of the poem is perfection. The greatest poems are only one or two verses in structure, because that is all that is required. He meets all the standard requirements. The writing was excellant but not perfect. I gave it a 9. Honestly, it is better than most tens; but because this is so good in general, its specific imperfection is clearer than that of most poems. GW62
Very romantic. An unforgettable moment which time cannot take from you. Thank you for sharing your fine art with your readers. Warm regards, Sandra
Boundless poetic mirage! Well said, Vidyadhar! Since times unknown poets are after this mirage…the way you sight the beauty of your ‘her’ in this poem is really beautiful! Ten, for sure!
if you want to see beauty you will find it to nowhere but to yourself., , , , , , , ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Hi, i really appreciate how ur feeling translated into this poem.i'm just trying to express my fantasy into poem & i require ur moral help to teach me how to write a poem like that of yours
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Simply, lucidly, tenderly and warmly presented, the 'beauty'! A lovely poem!