Vidyadhar Durgekar

Beauty - Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Sighting her in opposite mirror
Like a boundless poetic mirage
Finding no words I surrender
To the beauty unfolding its image

Beauty seemed lesser in lily
To compare her to lotus was silly
No simile, metaphor or metonymy
Describe her fathomless beauty aptly

Comments about Beauty by Vidyadhar Durgekar

  • (9/24/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    very beautiful indeed......and thanks for the compliments (Report) Reply

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  • (9/14/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    if you want to see beauty you will find it to nowhere but to yourself., , , , , , , ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    beauty beautifully described... short and nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (7/23/2008 3:30:00 AM)

    Can beauty be better described! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2008 11:02:00 AM)

    i really appreciate how ur feeling translated into this poem.i'm just trying to express my fantasy into poem & i require ur moral help to teach me how to write a poem like that of yours
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  • (6/13/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    Very romantic. An unforgettable moment which time cannot take from you. Thank you
    for sharing your fine art with your readers.

    Warm regards,

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  • (5/30/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    I thought this was written too well. Sometimes, a poet,
    will reach a very great height in some lines and fall a
    little short in others. This writer has done just that.
    The form and substance of the poem is perfection.
    The greatest poems are only one or two verses in
    structure, because that is all that is required.
    He meets all the standard requirements.
    The writing was excellant but not perfect.
    I gave it a 9. Honestly, it is better than most
    tens; but because this is so good in general, its
    specific imperfection is clearer than that of most poems.

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  • (5/26/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    Ahh but you have described her beauty aptly, a very delightful read, indeed! ! ! *10*! !
    Best regards, Friend Thad
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  • (5/21/2008 10:01:00 PM)

    Simply, lucidly, tenderly and warmly presented, the 'beauty'!
    A lovely poem!
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  • (5/21/2008 5:17:00 PM)

    Tis said that 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder.' This 'beholder' certainly has shining eyes - and a tenderhearted pen too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2008 12:52:00 PM)

    She sounds amazing, so worth the read here, thankyou! !

    Love duncan X
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  • (5/21/2008 8:14:00 AM)

    wow, she must be very beautiful...nice one (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Your lines themselves convey
    the boundless beauty of words
    without the simile metaphor n metonymy
    the fathomless beauty is conveyed…
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  • (5/16/2008 9:23:00 PM)

    Boundless poetic mirage! Well said, Vidyadhar! Since times unknown poets are after this mirage…the way you sight the beauty of your ‘her’ in this poem is really beautiful! Ten, for sure! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 16, 2008

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