Wandering down the lanes of summer Hill
Enjoying scintillating chill blow of wind
Mild, at times wild were the blows
Seems like wind is trying to lift me in its hand
Saw the staggering steps of my beloved
Coming from the other end of the hill
Her pink stole was fluttering like the waves of sea end
Eyes were blinking like the twinkling of stars
hairs were entangled on the face all around
A beautiful scene is embedded in my mind
Enough to rejuvenate the pensive days of Life
Fantastic description of beauty with great imagery and sentiments. Nice work :)
Wo0o0o0o0o0w it's amazing it's like a picture full of imaginary colors and fantastic description, , It's really awesome, , it deserve a rate more than 10++ :)
Beautiful moments well captured, these moments are forever etched in the minds of our soul and give solace in harsh winters and drey summers...beautiful poem Santosh ji
Very beautiful poem, great imagery thanks for inviting me to read it - keep writing!
What a wonderfull poem. Life is like that too. Sometimes beautiful things in life are blowen to us with harsh winds behind it.
A beautiful scene is embedded in my mind Enough to rejuvenate the pensive days of Life A thing of beauty is a joy forever.Eyes reveal the truth.Do read my LIPSTICK and IN MOMENTS
great imagination and imagary on this poem. It give you a great picture in your head. something i never see anyone do. keep it up
the last two lines were especially beautiful.. Namaste Santosh Sharma
Beautiful imagery in winds of elemental forces and the beauty of the beloved to share it with. Truly a memory to cherish.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem flashes the light of love, this beautiful image was painted on the canvas of my heart, thank you!