shiny shine

Before We Met

Before we met I wasn't sure what to do
who to turn to
I was afraid
wanting to give up
Feeling like no one understood me and never would
Feeling hurt and scared
Like love was not meant for me
That I would never find someone out there who trully cared
Not opening up to many others
Feeling like I would never heal
Than one day I meet this amazing boy who was there for me from the start
understanding me, comforting me when i got scared and guiding me when i became lost
knowing that at times life is complicated
and since then you have said that no matter what life brings us we will get through it together
knowing we have to move on from our pasts and that you will be there for me as I will for you
We both have had rough pasts but we pull through
life can be unfair but we get through it by being strong
trying to forget the pain and sorrow
Taking life day by day
being thankful that I have you in my life
I don't have enough words to begin to explain to you what you mean to me and what you have done for me
never wanting to hide in the shadows again
wanting to be here for you till the end
when you cry, when your scared, when you need to be comforted, when you just need a friend, when you need a sister, or a girlfriend or just a shoulder to lean on
You will forever have a spot in my heart and I will forever love you and care for you
You have trully changed my life in so many ways that it is hard to explain
and many people say i have changed their lives and helped them but you have helped me more than anyone in this world
Day after day I think about you praying that you are ok
Hoping you are safe and having a good day
Wishing that I could be there with you holding your hand
Saying not to be afraid together we will make it through
Wanting to let you know I will be here no matter if you are having a good or bad day
Letting you know that thinking of you gets me through the day
I can't help but looking forward till the time when I talk to you
To be with you and to say I love you
Having thoughts of me and you
Wanting so bad to be there and hold you and tell you how much I love you
Knowing you are the one want to be with
Hating knowing your in pain and wishing it was me, wanting you to get better
Wanting to hold you through the night
Wishing you could be in my sight
Never wanting to fight
Hoping that one day we will sit down and talk about our pasts
Acknowledging that people change
Wanting you to know that my arms are always open to you
I'll be by your side forever
Admitting when I do wrong and that I have been hurt way to many times
Knowing when you say you love me that for once someone means it
Willing to wait the rest of my life to hear you say ' i love you'

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

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Comments about Before We Met by shiny shine

  • DELETED NOW (3/4/2010 7:06:00 AM)

    it was way too long for what you were saying and it was a bit bleak to read...maybe try shortening it and use more flavor words...don't get me wrong it's a good message that u have some who has your back. It just wasn't all that appealing to me.

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  • *_sakura ~daisy_* (1/10/2010 7:04:00 PM)

    i love it..so expressive...passionate...truly displays loving relations...i can relate...

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  • Hailey Agnew (9/2/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    love it, very understanding and perceptive
    truly how people can change you

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (8/11/2009 5:06:00 PM)

    Before we met I wasn't sure what to do
    who to turn to
    I was afraid
    wanting to give up
    Feeling like no one understood me and never would
    Feeling hurt and scared

    Very strong intent and feeling of womanhood here during anyone's adolescence.
    voted 10 for you..

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  • Christopher Cofield (8/10/2009 8:58:00 PM)

    Another amazing one kiddo, great emotion, feeling & description so raw & real!

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  • ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (7/21/2009 7:56:00 PM)

    I can actually relate to this a lot. I regret things from my past and i would still be that girl if it wasnt for him. I know what its like to want to be there with them and to always be there for them no matter what state of mind they're in. And there are other things similar as well, but i think ive gotten the point across. The way you were able 2 put this into words is impressive and it turned out to be a very good piece. Well done and best wishes

    ~*~SG

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  • Clayton Young (7/17/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    Great write, this person must be very special. I like the writing and i can relate to some of it.

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  • Bele Lele (7/11/2009 2:36:00 PM)

    I love this nice piece

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  • Keith Hendrickson (7/7/2009 7:39:00 PM)

    top 2 bottom a really good piece. even though it kinda long its not to much to read cause i got caught up in the world of your words.... great write

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  • Whitney t (7/7/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    I love the poem.It expresses alot about you. kool poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! um...just a luv it. hope it turn out ok

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  • (: God's Wild Child :) (6/30/2009 2:04:00 PM)

    kool poem i like it. wish u guys the best.

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  • Surya . (6/27/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    a nice story in life, full of emotion. nice language too
    voted10
    surya

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  • *~*happily desturbed*~* ? (6/27/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    i agree with howard, a nice story of emotions, but it was too long and too many i's and you's, but t was good, keep writing.

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  • Howard Kern (6/26/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    A nice story of where emotions are.Not to be harsh or mean it was a bit too long and too many I's and You's.
    Please keep on writing and never give up for me or anyone.
    What you have written is very good prose that is all chopped up.

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  • Lady Grace (6/23/2009 7:49:00 PM)

    a long story and ends in love poem..grace

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  • Eyan Desir (6/22/2009 2:07:00 PM)

    you spelled the word about wrongly....
    good write i felt you should made this a little shorter
    but you get top marks....
    for your little love poem
    hehaha

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  • everything has a name but meeverything has a name but me (6/21/2009 8:21:00 PM)

    if this is truly you....you are a beautiful person. who writes beautiful poems...10

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  • Addicted to You ~Danielle Crumpton~ (6/21/2009 6:51:00 PM)

    i love it. it really says alot about u.

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  • Mary Lolly Florence Occenola (6/17/2009 2:59:00 PM)

    love well felt is love well expressed; there's too much love to give and just waiting for the right time.10 +

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