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Best Friends

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We were considered by others Best Friends
“unbreakable” is what our friendship was said to be
I knew it was to good to be true
I expected it might end but not so abruptly

I trusted you with everything
We had our fun
We played our games
It was unbelievable
A dream come true

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 07 January 2010

Your poem speaks volume of friendships...most friendships are short lived, a few are everlasting, nevertheless, we learn -or should learn lessons from those we meet on life's journey. Thanks for inviting me to read your work

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 August 2009

Best friends are always special friends and special part of life. We had our fun We played our games It was unbelievable A dream come true A tenner for the attitude depicted here.

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jko gug 06 August 2009

Its A Beautiful Poem,

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Cat Tiger 24 July 2009

The structure here is better. But silly grammatical and spelling mistakes. In the first 'stanza' you write 'I expected it would last but not so abruptly.'? ? ? Perhaps you meant 'I expected it might end but not so abruptly.' One must work harder to make a good poem than to do anything else in life. Yet it must look easy.

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Alf Hutchison 24 July 2009

Hello Shiny...trust broken in friendship is so difficult to repair but if the friendship is worth saving save it... don't wait... enjoyed your poem very much I wrote a poem on friendship about 40 years ago have a look nothing changes... regards Alf

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Darkness Everywhere 22 July 2009

amazing poem filled with so much emotion. keep it up.10+++

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Christopher Montalvo 21 July 2009

I really like this one, 'We stuck together though Still had our fun Played our games The future lay neatly So clearly' How I wish life was this easy.10/10

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Eyan Desir 19 July 2009

So sad...well go and talk 2 her....... why are sitting around life is too short.....well express 10

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Ted M 09 July 2009

Life is a journey, a voyage full of so many surprises. Life offers us so many things, and all depends on what we look for in the future, not dwell on the past, as past are just memories.

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

I agree with jameshia it was very good, it shows how friends come and go but the memories are here to stay

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