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Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0

Our friendship looked so joyful
now it appears doubtful
it upsets you when you see me with your friends
it upsets me when I see you with my friends
But now I see the truth

I now know that you were never my friend
You just acted like it
so you could use me
Now I am afraid to open up to a guy like that again

I am afraid to get backstabbed again
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Monica Sevilla 22 February 2010

nice poems..keep up! !

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Prakash Mehra 01 November 2009

Sometimes we decide before it happens. So beware of losing the established friendship.. Nicely written composition.

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Broken friendship is always painful but the lessons learnt helps us not to make the same mistakes. Well expressed lucid poem that is full of sad emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 August 2009

Our friendship looked so joyful now it appears doubtful it upsets you when you see me with your friends it upsets me when I see you with my friends But now I see the truth Rollercoaster part of palship.....narration continues into intimate details.Definitely a tenner.

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Audrey Heller 18 July 2009

We all, go through our trials and tribulations! It's all part, of growing up! We get hurt, but that's the way it is, as we go along, the way. One day, you'll look back and smile, as you remember, all the incidents you went through, during this time. You did a fine job, expressing yourself! Keep up, your good work.

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Sam Edison 13 July 2009

This was a great write and very well put. This is a situation we all go through way too many times in life. This is why it is so hard to put faith in others. We have to remind ourselves that there is good out there we just have to search for it.

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Brooke Luchich 16 June 2009

Something that happens too often, well written. Great poem

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a pick from life subject and you have done full justice to it...brought out the feel very well a 10

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

i am reminded of my freind a couple days ago, she used me... i really like this poem

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Floyd Minami 08 July 2008

Your poem is painful to me...because it reminds me, my best friend and now he is my best enemy.........keep up the good work, and keep shining....TC. Floyd Minami

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