shiny shine

Rookie - 5 Points (akron)

shiny shine Poems

1. Explain 3/8/2010
2. I Remember Once 7/28/2010
3. At Night 1/2/2010
4. Some-Times 8/17/2007
5. Before 6/7/2009
6. Obstacles 1/2/2010
7. I Can'T..... But I Can 6/3/2009
8. Dungeon 2/1/2007
9. Forever 5/29/2007
10. I Remember 2/7/2010
11. Letting Go 5/22/2009
12. Together 6/16/2009
13. I Will Remeber.... 5/29/2007
14. Midnight Rider 1/31/2007
15. Why Should I 5/22/2008
16. Before We Met 6/17/2009
17. Best Friends 2/15/2007
18. Broken Friendship 6/29/2007
19. Death 8/17/2007
20. Friendship Or Love 5/25/2007
21. Beach 2/1/2007

Comments about shiny shine

  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 9:06:00 PM)

    You're poems have alot of heart, but more importantly, you have alot of heart. You are probably the easiest person I've ever found to talk to, and you are soooo caring and thoughtful. You really make me feel better in my messed up world, and I will always be thankful for how much you've helped me.
    I hope you don't mind me posting this, but I felt I needed to.

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  • Stephen Feltham (7/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    Shiny Shine

    Great poems!
    Very profound for a young person with an amazing amount of sensivity.

    best regards
    Merlin (UK)

  • ~A Little Blue Bird~ ~A Little Blue Bird~ (5/6/2008 6:18:00 PM)

    Shiny shine is an awesome writer. Her poems will make you feel like your in a different world.(my favorite is the beach poem) They go deep.

    Keep writin Shine,

    ~The Little Blue Bird~

Best Poem of shiny shine

Beach

As I walk along the deserted beach
I feel the damp sand surronding my feet
I feel the cool relaxing breeze creep up upon me with ease
As I look out at the restless waves my thoughts unwind like restless days
The beach is a very quiet and calming place

Read the full of Beach

Dungeon

As I walk through the dark and eerie dungeon
I smell the musky air
The rotting corpse lays upon the warped wooden bench
As I open the creaking door the rusted hinge screaks
I see the well oiled chains laying so proudly upon the worn down dirt in the far gloom I hear echoing screams
I walk slowly over to examine the rotting corspe and discover a damaged necklace as I took it in the distance I hear a shooting
I suddenly hit the cold bricks, and screamed in shock

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