Beggar Poem by Amitava Sur

Beggar

Rating: 4.2


Oh' my dear, the passers by,
I beg you all to listen a while.
I don't beg any food from you
Not even any money.
I beg you all for a little sleep only -
what I lost for years many.
I beg for a bit of peace also,
For which I am dying so long.
Yes, I beg a little sleep and peace
I beg you give me please.
I'll just sleep for a little while -
I Only will sleep with a peace.

I'm yearning, I'm beckoning
I'm praying and crying for them
But alas, they never come to me
Nor bothered a little even.

I searched for them since long back
But I couldn't get even a bit.
I'm begging now from door to door
With a hope to get a bit.
Can you now, by any means -
Give me a little please.
I'll just sleep for a little while -
I Only will sleep with a peace.

I didn't sleep for a long long time
Also I need a peace in my mind,
I beg a little sleep and peace
I beg you give me please.
I'll just sleep for a little while-
I only will sleep with a peace.
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Amitava (14.5.2013)

Sunday, September 15, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about getting completely lost & restless in losing the love & peace from a human life. I tried to draw that picture with pen & paper
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 June 2014

Begging not for alms, but for peace and rest! They are perhaps more vital for a man alive in body but dead in spirit! A heart rending plea! It leaves disturbing reverberations!

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Roseann Shawiak 31 March 2014

Begging only for a quiet sleep is such a simple request, not answered readily if at all in life. I got lost and restless myself within the poem. Captured my sorrowful heart, Amitava, you've done well with this one - beautifully imagined. Thank you. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2016

Drawing with words is something you do well. Congrats on poem of the day and keep drawing

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M Asim Nehal 26 June 2016

Congratulations for the honors, a poem of the day indeed we all need sound sleep in a peaceful environment

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

The hardships of life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 30 August 2020

begging becomes poetic here

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Khairul Ahsan 25 May 2017

Loved the 'loud thoughts' of Elena Sandu.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 May 2017

That your fervent plea for a bit of peace and sleep has touched many a heart, is evident from the comments you have received from the readers and the honors your poem has received fr om the authorities at PoemHunter being selected as the Poem of the Day. Many congratulations, dear Amitava, for this wonderful poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 May 2017

That your fervent plea for a bit of peace and sleep has touched many a heart, is evident from the comments you have received from the readers and the honors your poem has received from the authorities at PoemHunter being selected as the Poem of the Day. Many congratulations, dear Amitava, for this wonderful poem!

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The chinmay 25 July 2016

emotional.....very well and nicely written...thanks for sharing

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