Beginning To Forget Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Beginning To Forget

Rating: 4.6


As I lay beneath the trees
Remembering what was you and me
The welling tears caress my face
As I begin to forget a lover’s embrace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Hey Tim, Short and sweet---but dont forget that lovers embrace. good write--thanks for sharing with me regards anju

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Anjali Sinha 06 August 2008

Yeah u deserve a +10

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Javier Falcon 06 August 2008

Its pretty good... A lover is the only item which you should not forget... Good write...

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Ency Bearis 08 August 2008

short and nice...well done..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 August 2008

this is amazing beauty of true love.gotcha!

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for everyone that leaves there are five more and its her fault she desided to miss out. I may barely know you but im sure ur something else.

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immortal Butterfly 20 March 2009

Wow This Is A Great Poem Your Thoughts Inspire As I Weep.

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Joseph Poewhit 10 March 2009

Under another tree there will be another girl, could even be the same one. Love is a trying game at 16 you have years to go. We all have heartbreaks in our lives.[TRY READING TO FORGET ]

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Trinidad Villafranca 06 January 2009

Your words they truly are something amazing you have a real talent

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Brittany graviet 06 October 2008

short but heart renching. your able to move people very easily.

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