Being Poem by P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

dear poet, its so happy to read your poems more and more times.my best wishes to you to become a best poet in the world of poetry.. nazar malolmuku from Poem Hunter.

Dear poet. i like your poem but sometimes to much imagery and no meaning or feeling in the poem kills the point your trying to get across. other wise i found it very good.

as all other poems of you, this is too indescribable....well done my beloved teacher...fayeda.

very nice poem a very thiking poem....simple but powerfull.....i like the poem for its flow toooo....please read....the idea of an idea..and whom do i belong to?

dear poet this is such a nice poem. great job well done

Life becomes cyclic and the poet painted it well

Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Water carries both cold and hot current and the flow of water is ever motivational. Water flows to serve others. Appearing and disappearing, forming and merging water dances with sweet ripple sound and you have captured an interesting imagery. This is an excellent poem beautifully penned...10

Hi Noushad, Wonderful poem. On the secrets and mysteries of Nature. Beautifully expressed. Brevity is the hallmark of your poems. Where ten words are needed to express something, you content yourselves with two. I look at your opening line, totally bewildered, astonished : : Under the curved blue: : You have not mentioned that it is SKY that you are speaking about. But one understands it. This is what poetry is all about. Great write. Keep it up! ! (Contd...)

part 2) Let me quote more: all in the ocean appearing and disappearing forming and merging again and again ever. Reading once again, I understand that you are speaking not just about sky or water or streams or ocean. It is about the human life as well; Do I find it a little philosophical! Hindu philosophy! ! On to mypoem list, so I'd come back for a re. A 100 is too little for this marvel! -unnikrishnan