Being Poem by P A NOUSHAD

P A NOUSHAD

P A NOUSHAD

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
P A NOUSHAD
PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

Being

Rating: 4.8


Under the curved blue
water flows forever,
cold current
hot current
fresh water into salty water
salty water into more salty water
going up as vapour
coming down as rain
all in the ocean
appearing and disappearing
forming and merging
again and again
ever.

Being
Monday, June 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nazar Malolmuku 27 September 2012

dear poet, its so happy to read your poems more and more times.my best wishes to you to become a best poet in the world of poetry.. nazar malolmuku from Poem Hunter.

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Matt Hartwell 19 May 2009

Dear poet. i like your poem but sometimes to much imagery and no meaning or feeling in the poem kills the point your trying to get across. other wise i found it very good.

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Fayeda Vanimel 07 October 2011

as all other poems of you, this is too indescribable....well done my beloved teacher...fayeda.

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Wahab Abdul 10 January 2012

very nice poem a very thiking poem....simple but powerfull.....i like the poem for its flow toooo....please read....the idea of an idea..and whom do i belong to?

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Luwi Habte 15 May 2009

dear poet this is such a nice poem. great job well done

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 October 2020

Life becomes cyclic and the poet painted it well

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Chinedu Dike 12 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

Water carries both cold and hot current and the flow of water is ever motivational. Water flows to serve others. Appearing and disappearing, forming and merging water dances with sweet ripple sound and you have captured an interesting imagery. This is an excellent poem beautifully penned...10

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 March 2018

Hi Noushad, Wonderful poem. On the secrets and mysteries of Nature. Beautifully expressed. Brevity is the hallmark of your poems. Where ten words are needed to express something, you content yourselves with two. I look at your opening line, totally bewildered, astonished : : Under the curved blue: : You have not mentioned that it is SKY that you are speaking about. But one understands it. This is what poetry is all about. Great write. Keep it up! ! (Contd...)

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 March 2018

part 2) Let me quote more: all in the ocean appearing and disappearing forming and merging again and again ever. Reading once again, I understand that you are speaking not just about sky or water or streams or ocean. It is about the human life as well; Do I find it a little philosophical! Hindu philosophy! ! On to mypoem list, so I'd come back for a re. A 100 is too little for this marvel! -unnikrishnan

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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