My Father Poem by P.A. NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)



PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

My Father

Rating: 4.8

Elegant smile and a benign look,
I feel the power of his love,
with sane words of knowledge,
sitting in the ancestral house
tackles the enigma of my life,
makes both ends meet,
from within the spiritual source
outstretching wings of peace,
he seeps
into the petals of darkness,
it remains as endless memories,
I recollect him from my childhood,
the brook is flowing still
mirroring the gleaming the starry nights,
though my father was laid to rest
in the graveyard near the Mosque,
get on like a house on fire
and trip down memory lane

My Father
Janice Windle 30 April 2008

I like this word picture very much - the stillness at sunset. 'The unhesitant birds' brings back memories of darting swallows flying home in the glare of an Indian sunset.

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Steephan Joy 20 May 2008

world number one painting of the dusk, really great.

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Fay Slimm 14 August 2008

I like the feel of undulated in unending canvas - very well thought out.

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Estrella Baldemosa 13 February 2009

I love the are a fine poet.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 20 September 2020

memory about the beloved father like that of a house on fire. heartfelt lines, Noushad

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 May 2020

Elegant smile and a benign look of your father motivates us to lead life in a positive way and you feel the power of his love. You gain knowledge from your father. In the darkness father shows us light and through endless memories we find peaceful path. This is a nice tribute poem to a father from a son. God is our greatest father and he bestows us eternal peace and bliss! This is a great work of course! ...10

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Chinedu Dike 12 May 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, lovely and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

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Soul Watcher 04 June 2016

Nice poem thank you for sharing..

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Kelly Kurt 19 March 2015

I feel the love you carry with you for your father and sense that he passed on to you wisdom, humility and a passion for sharing thoughts.

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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