Being Together ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Being Together ~

Rating: 5.0


Our love was never the sunshine or rainbows,
It always walked through the mountains and valleys,
Took a swing when the wind was strong and stormy,
The rains never intrude our being together,
Nor the rough weather on the ship, we sailed in high seas,
We weather together when it withered,
And made energy from the windmill of emotions,
To gallop on the relation, we nurtured in wildness,
Now when we see the dogs and the horses together
In the party room we laugh out loud and share our pie.

Sunday, June 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: blind love,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A beautiful love poem so charming! Thank you dear Asim ji for this lovely poem..5 stars

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Kostas Lagos 06 June 2021

Amazing poem Asim! Full of warm feeling

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Varsha M 07 June 2021

Lovely poem and i think this is true love that kept you both together dispite all odds you both made it. Good one sir. Sir please check is it We weather together when it withered...i couldn't get the exact meaning there.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 June 2021

The rains never intrude our being together, Nor the rough weather on the ship, we sailed in high seas, We weather together when it withered, . So aptly worded as the love betwixt husband and wife.5 Stars Full for this amazing poem!

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me poet yeps poet 06 June 2021

one day I'll just vanish on the wings of the cool breeeze do rememeber me PP ME waswas

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Rajnish Manga 14 June 2021

The rains never intrude our being together, Nor the rough weather.... we sailed in high seas.... And made energy from the windmill of emotions. Amazing poem of love which remains a winner even in the face of adversities. Thanks, Asim ji.

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S H 09 June 2021

Nothing is like being together.

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Wonderfully woven poem, Masterpiece. I enjoyed being together for so many years so much.

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Indira Renganathan 08 June 2021

A beautiful love poem with nice metaphors....certainly deserves high score....5*****

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Rebecca Navarre 07 June 2021

A powerfully moving poem of beauty, strength, friendship and love! .. So very beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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