Our love was never the sunshine or rainbows,
It always walked through the mountains and valleys,
Took a swing when the wind was strong and stormy,
The rains never intrude our being together,
Nor the rough weather on the ship, we sailed in high seas,
We weather together when it withered,
And made energy from the windmill of emotions,
To gallop on the relation, we nurtured in wildness,
Now when we see the dogs and the horses together
In the party room we laugh out loud and share our pie.
Lovely poem and i think this is true love that kept you both together dispite all odds you both made it. Good one sir. Sir please check is it We weather together when it withered...i couldn't get the exact meaning there.
The rains never intrude our being together, Nor the rough weather on the ship, we sailed in high seas, We weather together when it withered, . So aptly worded as the love betwixt husband and wife.5 Stars Full for this amazing poem!
one day I'll just vanish on the wings of the cool breeeze do rememeber me PP ME waswas
The rains never intrude our being together, Nor the rough weather.... we sailed in high seas.... And made energy from the windmill of emotions. Amazing poem of love which remains a winner even in the face of adversities. Thanks, Asim ji.
Wonderfully woven poem, Masterpiece. I enjoyed being together for so many years so much.
A beautiful love poem with nice metaphors....certainly deserves high score....5*****
A powerfully moving poem of beauty, strength, friendship and love! .. So very beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful love poem so charming! Thank you dear Asim ji for this lovely poem..5 stars