Best Buddy Poem by Rini Shibu

Best Buddy

Rating: 5.0


Everything messy
And you feel dizzy
Have something fizzy
Before you go crazy
When you are boozy
Your eyes are foggy
You walk around the city
Your heart is empty
Some feel pity
But there is somebody
A little bit funny
Your best buddy
Who loves you honey
Turns everything sunny
Though very busy
Still with you pretty

Tuesday, January 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 09 February 2018

Enchanting poem, Rini and so well rhymed! Indeed we ought to be grateful to have friends in life and especially that buddy, time or no time that buddy has always time and the reverse. Wow! This is precious, Rini, which we call love in friendship. A 10 and much much more, Rini!

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Thanks sylvia for your wonderful comment

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2018

You have amazingly portrayed the spirit of love and friendship in this beautiful poem that rhymes too! Excellent Rini, I enjoyed....!

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Rini Shibu 06 January 2018

Thanks Dillip, life without friends is meaningless

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Muzahidul Reza 05 January 2018

love and friendship both we need in time but we need be careful of choosing both, great write, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Rini Shibu 05 January 2018

You are right we should be careful in choosing.. Thanks Reza

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2018

The way of presentation is fantastic. Beautiful poem on love and friendship.

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Rini Shibu 04 January 2018

Thank you so much kumar for reading and commenting

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Akhtar Jawad 03 January 2018

Love and friendship wipe our tears, painful life becomes a pleasure in the company of the best buddy. A nice painting of human sentiments!

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Rini Shibu 03 January 2018

Thank you so much Akhtarji

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